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The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pictures
belows
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below
 illustrate the development plans in Lisip and
compares
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compare
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 the changes with
present
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the present
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 time.
Overall
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,
Dual
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a Dual
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 carriageway is added in the
southreness
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southernness
. Currently, the countryside is settled in the
northest
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most north
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 place, and the housing places are
concerntrated
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concentrated
 in
south
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the south
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 area.
Futhermore
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Furthermore
, there are two paths and numerous shops on both sides of the main road. One path in the west goes through to the school and the other one in the east goes through to the park. In the planned development,
main
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the main
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 street is replaced with
pedestrian
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a pedestrian
the pedestrian
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, where motors are not
alllowed
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allowed
enter
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to enter
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. Above the pedestrian, a bus station and a car park
is
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are
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 added, and
also
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 a new housing is
the
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in the
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northen
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northern
 east. In the
southen
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southern
 direction, there were old and new houses and a park, which is smaller than the current one. These establishments are surrounded by
the
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a
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 Dual carriageway.
Besides
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, the school is
situatrd
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situated
at
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apply
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out of the carriageway.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pedestrian-only zone
  • dual carriageway
  • current
  • surrounded by
  • propose
  • infrastructure
  • bus station
  • car park
  • residential housing
  • traffic flow
  • connectivity
  • green spaces
  • recreational areas
  • development plans
  • main features
  • town center
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