The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The pictures

belows

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below

illustrate the development plans in Lisip and

compares

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compare

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the changes with

present

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the present

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time.

Overall

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Dual

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a Dual

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carriageway is added in the

southreness

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southernness

. Currently, the countryside is settled in the

northest

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most north

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place, and the housing places are

concerntrated

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concentrated

south

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the south

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area.

Futhermore

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Furthermore

, there are two paths and numerous shops on both sides of the main road. One path in the west goes through to the school and the other one in the east goes through to the park. In the planned development,

main

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street is replaced with

pedestrian

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a pedestrian

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, where motors are not

alllowed

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allowed

enter

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to enter

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. Above the pedestrian, a bus station and a car park

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added, and

also

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a new housing is

the

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in the

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northen

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northern

east. In the

southen

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southern

direction, there were old and new houses and a park, which is smaller than the current one. These establishments are surrounded by

the

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Dual carriageway.

Besides

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, the school is

situatrd

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situated

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apply

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out of the carriageway.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

154 words

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pedestrian-only zone
dual carriageway
current
surrounded by
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infrastructure
bus station
car park
residential housing
traffic flow
connectivity
green spaces
recreational areas
development plans
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