Your child is going on a trip to a nature reserve organised by a local youth club. The club leader is looking for parents to travel with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the leader of the youth club. In your letter - say why you want to go on a trip - describe what you could do to help during the trip - ask for more details about the trip

Dear Mr. Smith I heard that you're finding parents to accompany you
at
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the nature reserve. I'
m
eager to join as I believe it'll be a fun experience and I'
m
happy to assist you with whatever you may need on the trip. I'
m
a perfect fit for the position as I've been to many nature reserves in the past,
due to
which I gained a ton of experience
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how these trips are organised and executed.
Moreover
, many kids coming on the trip already know me;
therefore
, they'll be comfortable around me. I can help with supervising the children on the
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and on their tour of the nature reserve and explicitly tell them about the different kinds of birds and mammals.
Moreover
, I can prepare healthy snacks for kids as I'
m
a chef by profession.
Lastly
, kindly inform me
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time and location of the meet-up and duration of stay at the reserve at your earliest convenience. I'll have to apply for leave from my job
accordingly
. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Akshita Parasher
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