Your child is going on a trip to a nature reserve organised by a local youth club. The club leader is looking for parents to travel with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the leader of the youth club. In your letter - say why you want to go on a trip - describe what you could do to help during the trip - ask for more details about the trip
Dear Mr. Smith
I heard that you're finding parents to accompany you
at
the nature reserve. I'Change preposition
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m
eager to join as I believe it'll be a fun experience and I'm
happy to assist you with whatever you may need on the trip.
I'm
a perfect fit for the position as I've been to many nature reserves in the past, due to
which I gained a ton of experience of
how these trips are organised and executed. Change preposition
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Moreover
, many kids coming on the trip already know me; therefore
, they'll be comfortable around me.
I can help with supervising the children on the coach
and on their tour of the nature reserve and explicitly tell them about the different kinds of birds and mammals. Correct your spelling
couch
Moreover
, I can prepare healthy snacks for kids as I'm
a chef by profession.
Lastly
, kindly inform me the
time and location of the meet-up and duration of stay at the reserve at your earliest convenience. I'll have to apply for leave from my job Change preposition
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accordingly
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I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Akshita ParasherSubmitted by parasherakshita123 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite