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The line graph shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meats in a European country from 1979 to 2004.

The line graph shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meats in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
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The line chart illustrates the numerous
of
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foods
who
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 are consumed over a period of 25 years starting from 1979 in Europe.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 chicken consumption shows
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 increase in 25 years,
whereas
 fish, beef, and lamb have a downward trend.
Although
 chicken provides a fluctuation between 1979 and 2004, it has become a
favorite
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meals
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 in
a
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European nations. The consumption of chicken started below 150
gram
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 in 1979 and it fluctuated until 2000, reached a peak at 250
gram
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 and it fell
down
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again in 2004 to around 240
gram
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.
On the other hand
, beef and lamb meats
also
 experienced a decrease even though they fluctuated
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 a quarter of
century
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. In 1979,
majority
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 of European people consumed beef and lamb, respectively approximately 225
gram
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 and 150
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 yet both of them drop significantly by
a
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half, reaching above 100
gram
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 and 50
gram
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 in 2004.
Furthermore
, fish consumption
also
 revealed a decline but it has a steady downward over the periods from 55
gram
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 in 1979 to almost 50
gram
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 in 2004.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gram with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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