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Your local council has advertised for volunteers to teach on a basic english programme for refugees. You would like to do some work for this programme in your free time. Write a letter to the programmer coordinator. In your letter - explain why you would like to do unpaid work on this programme -describe why you are a suitable candidate -say when you are available to teach

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to apply for the position of assistant teacher of basic English
programmer
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 advertised in the newspaper on 24th June. I have been an English teacher for 10 years and I currently teach at 'Summer Spirit' school for the
last
 2 years. I volunteered
last
 summer for the same programme and found it extremely gratifying. My purpose is to give back to the society in whichever way possible. I have a lot of practical experience in teaching refugees as they are different from usual students;
therefore
, my approach towards them is more practical than theoretical which makes me a suitable candidate for the post. My responsibilities at the moment include my job which is 3 hours every day from 12 pm-3 pm respectively.
Thus
, I am available on weekdays after 3 pm and on Saturdays. I would like to have my Sundays free as I spend time with family. I am attaching my CV. Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to discussing the details of the role
further
 in person at your convenience. Yours faithfully, Akshita Parasher
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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