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The chat below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2022 and future projection of 2025. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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 bar chart illustrates the statistics of main exports in Southland in 2000 , the current year and the forecast for that 2025.
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, the amount of industrial tourism is the most source of revenue ,
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 the figure
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 meat
products
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 is the lowest rate in all over these periods.
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, currently
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dairy
products
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 have the highest rate of exports.
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 the data, there is a slight rise in the international tourism income in each particular year of
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 question. It was above 8
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pounds
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 in 2000. Which is almost 9
billion
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pounds
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 in 2022 and the forecast for 2025 will be 10
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pounds
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.
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,
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 the number of dairy
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 soar noticeably from 7
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pounds
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 to 10
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pounds
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 in 2022 , there will drop by nearly 9
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pounds
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 in 2025. The meat
products
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 revenue display a marginal decline
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, it does not exceed 6
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pounds
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 in the period of mention.
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