The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group.
The provided table enumerates the populace of New Zealand in the years 2011 and 2012.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that the alterations between the given period were not too high, however
a drastic change Add a comma
,however
occured
for the age group Correct your spelling
occurred
ranked
from 65 and Correct your spelling
ranged
further
.
It is undeniable that the highest index was shown in 2012, including all ages it was over 4 billions
, Change to singular
billion
whereas
the lowest figure is seen to be eventuated in 2011 among people aged 65 and more. The significative
reached only five hundred Replace the word
significance
thousands
, Change to singular
thousand
however
, almost doubled just in a year and had the highest number in the percentage change.
Turning to the details, while
the statistics of other age groups were increasing, for individuals under 15 and for those aged from 15 to 39 it worked in a completely opposite way. The digits decreased in
thousands. Change preposition
to
Moreover
, it has to be noticed that the numerals of people aged from 40 to 64, and ones of all ages grew in
the same amount of 60 Change preposition
to
thousands
by 2012.Change to singular
thousand
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