The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie chart illustrates electricity production

units

of electricity production by

fuel

, namely coal,

oil

, natural

gas

, hydropower, and nuclear power in

Australia

and

France

in 1980 and 2000.

Overall

Australia

and

France

experienced an increase in electricity

units

. In

Australia

, the famous

fuel

was Coal, meanwhile, in

France

, the popular source was nuclear.

To begin

with, in 1980,

Australia

used four sources (coal,

oil

, natural

gas

, and hydropower). The total production was 100

units

, which number rose to 130 in 2000. In the same year, the coal was 50 entities, and twenty

years

later the number dramatically increased to 130. The

oil

experienced decreased to 2 in 2000.

However

, natural

gas

extremely fell from 20 to 2

units

Finally

, Hydropower rose to 36 in 2000.

However

, in

France

, there are five sources of

fuel

, the total

units

in 1980 were 90 and

then

increased to 180

units

in 2000. The coal remained stable for two different

years

Next,

Oil

increased to 25; meanwhile, natural

gas

dramatically fell from 25 to 2

units

. Same as

oil

, natural

gas

fell to 2 in 20

years

Moreover

, nuclear

fuel

became very popular; the number rose in 20

years

, from 15

units

to 126 in 2000, which hit the peak.

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