The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.

The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.
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The given pie charts illustrate the proportions of some particulars field that involve in Turkey's economy between 2000 and 2016. By and large, there were some changes that occurred in most of the sectors,
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, one of them was stay. Healthcare and Education together kept the 17% of contribution in both of the years. Meanwhile, Construction made it to
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more than three (3-10). A similar trend was
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shown by finance, business, and others that increased by almost twice per cent (5-8).
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, Manufacturing join the group which increased the contribution, it grew from 8% to 12%,
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Trade, Utilities, and Transportation (counted as one sector) which went up from 14% to 16%.
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, the Agriculture sector significantly decreased the contribution from 24% to 14%. There are
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Leisure and Hospitality that dropped from 17% to 14%. As mentioned in the beginning, most of the aspects are dropped in proportions, including Government which went down from 12% to 9%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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