The chart below gives information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below gives information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The
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graphs indicate the percentage of
population
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the population
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that was present in the
year
2000 in two different countries. The data is divided
in
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three
age
groups and the graphs
also
show the estimated variations in the
amount
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of people in the
year
2050. As we look at the charts
initially
, it is noticeable that the folks belonging to teenage and middle adulthood groups dominate the size in both
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areas. Looking at Yemen, in the
year
2000, the
age
group of 0-14 years covered half of the country, followed by the
age
group of 15-59 years.
However
, it has been predicted that in the
year
2050, the number of adolescents and adults would increase
upto
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up to
57.3% and will be tracked by infants and kids. The old
age
circle will rise
upto
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up to
5.7% in 2050. Studying the pie-charts of Italy, we can say that the statistics are a bit
smiliar
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similar
to that of Yemen, as in 2000, the majority of the land is covered by teens and adults.
Nevertheless
,
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toddlers covered only 14.3% of the area. The variations in size assumed in the
year
2050 are, an improvement in the numbers of old folks by 18.2%,
while
there will be a decrease in infants, young teens and adults.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demographics
  • Age structure
  • Dependency ratio
  • Life expectancy
  • Birth rate
  • Socioeconomic development
  • Projections
  • Developing country
  • Developed country
  • Youthful population
  • Aged population
  • Population aging
  • Pension systems
  • Healthcare services
  • Economic conditions
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