The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the information about gender joining various courses in the evening at an adult education centre in 2009 and the pie chart presents the proportion of ages of the attendants.
Overall
, it can be seen that most activities were join
by females more than males and most of them were 50 Change the verb form
were joined
years
old or above.
According to
the bar chart, it’s clear that women interested
in language 40 Add a missing verb
are interested
persons
, followed by painting, drama, and sculpture, with the figures being 30, 20 and 5 persons
. On the contrary
, painting
was the highest number interested by men with 25 Add an article
the painting
persons
, come after by language Replace the word
people
20
Change preposition
with 20
persons
. Interestingly, the figure of drama and sculpture are similar with 10 Replace the word
people
persons
of
each course.
Apparently, the highest number of attendant ages was occupied by Change preposition
in
elder
with 50 Add an article
an elder
years
old or over, while
the youngest people with
20 Change preposition
apply
years
old was
the least attended. Correct subject-verb agreement
were
In addition
, the middle ages in both 30-39 and 40-49 years
old participated 16
% and 26% respectively.Change preposition
at 16
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