The graph below shows that the persentage of Australian export to four countries from 1990 to 2012

The graph below shows that the persentage of Australian export to four countries  from 1990 to 2012
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The given line chart serves data about the amount of Australian export to some particular
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in 13
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. From the graph,
it is clear that
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one of the
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was stable in importing from Australia, yet most of the
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fluctuated or even constantly dropped every year. China is the country which slowly rose the percentage in the early
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, starting from the first 10
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at approximately 5%, continuing to 10% in 2005, and significantly climbing to 25% just in five
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.
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, it keeps the trend and reach its peak percentage in 2012 at almost 30%. On the other hand, Japan
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consistently dropped by almost twice in the first ten
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but slightly rose in 2005 (17%-18%).
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, it dropped again to 16% in the next 5
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and continued to stabilise around that number until the end of the period. The rest of the
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(The US and India) were changed lucratively.
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, India was not importing from Australia until 2000, it significantly increased the percentage to approximately 8% in 2010
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but decreased to around 5% in the next two
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