The graph below shows that the persentage of Australian export to four countries from 1990 to 2012
The given line chart serves data about the amount of Australian export to some particular
Countries
in 13 Use synonyms
years
.
From the graph, Use synonyms
it is clear that
one of the Linking Words
Countries
was stable in importing from Australia, yet most of the Use synonyms
Countries
fluctuated or even constantly dropped every year.
China is the country which slowly rose the percentage in the early Use synonyms
years
, starting from the first 10 Use synonyms
years
at approximately 5%, continuing to 10% in 2005, and significantly climbing to 25% just in five Use synonyms
years
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it keeps the trend and reach its peak percentage in 2012 at almost 30%.
On the other hand, JapanLinking Words
,
consistently dropped by almost twice in the first ten Remove the comma
apply
years
but slightly rose in 2005 (17%-18%). Use synonyms
However
, it dropped again to 16% in the next 5 Linking Words
years
and continued to stabilise around that number until the end of the period.
The rest of the Use synonyms
countries
(The US and India) were changed lucratively. Use synonyms
However
, India was not importing from Australia until 2000, it significantly increased the percentage to approximately 8% in 2010Linking Words
,
but decreased to around 5% in the next two Remove the comma
apply
years
.Use synonyms
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