The table below shows how many students of a school in the UK chose to take part in four different sports between 2001 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following table depicts the number of pupils who studied in the UK and participated in four different types of sports in 10 years period from 2001 to 2011.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that football was the biggest figure in all years. Although
basketball was the next popular trend among the students
, it fell steeply and became the least number of students
who chose this
sport, while
both swimming and running displayed broadly similar trends.
In 2001, football, which was the highest numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
students
, started the graph precisely at 60 participants and fluctuated until 2007 between from
70 to 60 before Change preposition
apply
steadily
recovery and Change the adverb
steady
finished
the data at around 69 Wrong verb form
finishing
students
. As for basketball, it begand
the statistic, which remained unchanged from 2008 to 2011, at over 52 pupils Correct your spelling
began
then
steadily increased to 60 before plummeting to 20 students
.
On the other hand
, both running and swimming started the figure at around 20 students
and then
swimming peaked at 60 participants in 2006 before huge
dropped and finished the data at over 28. Even though running was the smallest Correct article usage
a huge
numbers
Change the noun form
number
students
who chose Change preposition
of students
this
sports
, it increased dramatically to 60 participants by 2007, and it became the second Fix the agreement mistake
sport
popular
trend in the UK school.Correct quantifier usage
most popular
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