Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

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countries

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international sports by building specialised

facilities

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training

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top

athetes

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athletes

instead

of

ensure

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sport

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facilities

that everyone can use.I think that

this

method completely is wrong for

devoloping

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developing

the

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people

,

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because

sport

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mean

is

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health and

healthyness

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healthiness

is

essencial

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essential

for everybody.

Countries

believe that

train

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top athletes will be better for

develop

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of

people

,

however

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they do not think that

,

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each person may not

athlet

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athletic

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to

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my mind,the governments have to build new

sport

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centers

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and provide them

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with sport

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sport

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facilities

that everyone can use or there is another way that they can sell some

sport

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equipments

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with

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cheap

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cost.

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generally

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people

may not go to

gym

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but they want

exercise

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and most

of

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the sport

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sport

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facilities

are expensive in

sportshops

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sports shops

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that

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,

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if these

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these equipment

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will be cheap. At the same

time

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the governments

also

have to encourage

to

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each person

for

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go

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to

sport

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centers

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or

may be

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they can

built

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build

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new

area

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in

work places

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for exercise.Humans can allocate their work time for their health and

this

time should not affect

salaries

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of

people

.Surrely

countries

have to change some rules in the

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code,

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in my point of

view

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this

will be effective for

increase

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healthy

people

in public.

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:the government can create the rule that,

people

can visit the gym which will locate in

work places

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for thirty

minute

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and

people

have to pay 1

persentage

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percentage

of their salaries for visiting

this

area. In

conclude

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I think that exercising is important for health and if

countries

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wants

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belong to healthy

poeple

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people

,they should provide

sport

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sports

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facilities

that everyone can use.