The office building where you work doesn't have any parking spaces available for employees. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -explain the problem - suggest a solution - say how on-site or nearby parking would benefit employees.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that there is no available parking space
for the employees in the vicinity of the workplace building.
For the past four months, everyone in the office is
dissatisfied with the parking arrangement and lack of other areas to park nearby. A 25-minute walk away parking Wrong verb form
has been
space
is not acceptable by the working staff because it is time-consuming and redundant. Additionally
, employees with arthritis and back pain suffer greatly due to
this
.
Perhaps we could consider renting 'Gold Arena's' parking space
for a few months as it is only 5 minutes away from the office building; thus
, it will significantly reduce the distance that employees have to cover each day after parking their vehicles. Moreover
, as discussed in the last
floor meeting, we can use the profits from last
year's sales to build the company's own parking space
underground which will be used by over 150 members of the workforce.
Thank you for taking my complaint into consideration. Further
details can be discussed in person at your availability.
Yours sincerely,
Akshita ParasherSubmitted by parasherakshita123 on
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coherence and cohesion
Address the manager by name (if known) instead of using "Sir/Madam" for a more personalized approach.
task response
Fully address all the points in the task prompt, including the benefits of on-site or nearby parking for employees.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite