In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by fast foods. This has a negative impact on families, individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, fast

food

is replaced traditional

foods

in several countries. It has several drawbacks to relationships among family members, friends, and communities.

This

essay discusses traditional

foods

and fast

foods

and I disagree to replace traditional

foods

with fast

foods

. ,First of all, traditional

food

is healthier than fast

food

For example

, it contains numerous natural products which contain high amounts of vitamins and minerals.

However

, untraditional

food

can not be compared with the traditional one because has

less

Correct quantifier usage

fewer

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or no natural products, but

instead

, it is rich in unhealthy compounds

such

as lipids, proteins, and free radicals which sometimes cause cancer in human beings. So , I prefer traditional

foods

not fast

foods

. Despite the above, traditional

foods

make a good relationship between family members and individuals in societies.

For instance

, if someone makes traditional

food

at home, he invites his friends to eat in his home and they meet each other which makes renew the relationships between friends and family members, and leads to make a good community.

In addition

, it increases the value of love in the heart of each individual. In conclusion, fast

food

has various side effects on human health

such

as causing cancer or other diseases.

Nevertheless

, traditional

foods

are healthier and produced from natural products in general. Because of

this

, I prefer traditional

foods

and disagree to replace them with fast

food

which

are

Change the verb form

show examples

unhealthy.

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