The graphs show the size of the Ozone layer hole in Antarctic and three productions of damaged gases to the Antarctic Ozone from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs show the size of the Ozone layer hole in Antarctic and three productions of damaged gases to the Antarctic Ozone from 1980 to 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line charts illustrate the measure of
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a hole
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in the
Antartic
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Antarctic
Ozone and the
gases
which can produce
damages
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in that area during two decades.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that there were increases in the hole and the
gases
of
CFC-
12 and N2O, whilst
CFC-
11 gas fell between 1980 and 2000.
To begin
, the Ozone of
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experienced a hole in 1980 at around 500 thousand
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square km, rising steadily until 1990 and
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over the next 5 years, reaching
at
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almost 1500 thousand.
Furthermore
, it rocketed dramatically in 2000 and reached a peak at well over 3000 thousand. The Ozone layer is caused by three damaged
gases
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which the gas of
CFC-
11 was the majority in 1980
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at nearly 70 tonnes. It remained stable until 1983 and declined significantly over a period of 12 years and continued a slight decrease until
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year.
On the other hand
, the
CFC-
12 and N2O
gases
depicted a growth
although
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.
CFC-
12 began at about 30 tonnes and rose gradually until 2000 and reached
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twice in that year,
whereas
N2O had no
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in 1990 and plummeted suddenly during a decade reaching
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above 20 tonnes.
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