There are two-line chart diagrams depict changes that the percent of electrical appliance in households in 1920-2019 and the total time of doing housework every weeks in same time.
There are two-line chart diagrams depicting changes that the
percentage
of electrical appliances in households in 1920-2019 and the total time
of doing housework
every week at the same time
.
For the first line chart diagram, it is clear that
the figures are about three kinds of electrical equipment. For the percentage
of washing machines, it could be noticed that there existed a slightly increased from 1920 to 1960. Furthermore
, it increased by 30%. From 1960 to the next 50 years, it kept steady. The percentage
of households with refrigerators and vacuum cleaners, as an overall
trend
, climbed from 1920 to 2019. It should be noticed that the percentage
of refrigerators had a more dramatic change than the vacuum cleaners. It clearly shows that the rate of using refrigerators had rapidly increased, and nearly 100 per cent went up.
The second line chart diagram represents the time
people
do housework
every week. It shows a quickly decreased trend
. In 1950, people
did housework
at least to spend 50 hours, and yet people
only spent ten hours on housework
in 2019. It was a dramatic change.
In conclusion, it is obvious that the percentage
of households with electrical equipment is increasing trend
. In addition
, people
spending time
on homework had a going up trend
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