The bar chart shows the number of volunteers in New Zealand who helped in sports organizations in 2010. The pie chart illustrates the number of volunteers doing different types of jobs for that same period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the number of volunteers in New Zealand who helped in sports organizations in 2010. The pie chart illustrates the number of volunteers doing different types of jobs for that same period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar
chart
depicts
the
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apply
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information about volunteers in New Zealand
participated
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who participated
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in
sport
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sports
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organizations and the pie
chart
presents the proportion of each
types
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type
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of
jobs
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job
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in the year 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that the percentage of a
couple
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family
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families
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with
a
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dependent children was the highest number throughout the period and most of the participants had
supported
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in coaching and teaching.
According to
the bar
chart
,
it is clear that
the biggest amount was occupied by a couple and dependent children with 49.8%, followed by
couple
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couples
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with no children, other households, and one parent, with the figure being 26.9%, 12.4%, and 10.9%, respectively. Moving on to the pie
chart
, the lowest ratio of job
supported
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support
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accounted for medical support with 62,700 which is almost 4 times
fewer
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than teaching support.
In addition
, there were another 3 types of
job
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jobs
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, comprising timekeeper, committee member, and referee or umpire were responsible for 128,000, 158,600, and 98,300 respectively.
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