The diagram illustrates the life cycle of salmon through various stages.
The diagram illustrates the life cycle of
salmon
through various stages
.
Overall
, there are 3 stages
in the process, with 2 stages
happen
in freshwater Wrong verb form
happening
while
the last
step occurr
in saltwater.
As can be seen, the first step in the process is hatching the Correct your spelling
occur
occurs
salmon
eggs
to be fry
. The Wrong verb form
fried
salmon
eggs
are covered by reeds and small stones in the flow-moving upper river
. After 5 - 6 months, these eggs
hatch and develop fry
which is about 3 - 8cm. The fry
spend
approximately 4 years staying fast-flowing lower Change the verb form
spends
river
before moving another
place.
Change preposition
to another
At
the following Change preposition
In
stages
, the fry
grows up to become the smolt with the
length is 12 - 15cm. They Correct article usage
a
leaves
the Change the verb form
leave
river
in order to go to the open sea and live here approximately
5 years. After that, the smolt transforms into adult Change preposition
for approximately
salmon
, that
is about 70 – 76 cm. Adult Correct pronoun usage
which
salmon
finds
a safe place in the Correct subject-verb agreement
find
river
to hatch the eggs
and continues
their life cycleCorrect subject-verb agreement
continue
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