The diagram illustrates the life cycle of salmon through various stages.

The diagram illustrates the life cycle of

salmon

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through various

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.

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, there are 3

stages

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in the process, with 2

stages

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happen

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happening

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in freshwater

while

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the

last

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step

occurr

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occur

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in saltwater. As can be seen, the first step in the process is hatching the

salmon

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eggs

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to be

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fry

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. The

salmon

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eggs

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are covered by reeds and small stones in the flow-moving upper

river

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. After 5 - 6 months, these

eggs

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hatch and develop

fry

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which is about 3 - 8cm. The

fry

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spend

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approximately 4 years staying fast-flowing lower

river

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before moving

another

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to another

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place.

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the following

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, the

fry

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grows up to become the smolt with

the

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length is 12 - 15cm. They

leaves

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leave

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the

river

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in order to go to the open sea and live here

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for approximately

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5 years. After that, the smolt transforms into adult

salmon

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,

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that

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is about 70 – 76 cm. Adult

salmon

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finds

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find

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a safe place in the

river

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to hatch the

eggs

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and

continues

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continue

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their life cycle