As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes. Why does this happen? How does this affect society?
It is certainly true that today worldwide the structure of family sizes has become
more
smaller when compared with the past generations. There are many reasons for Change the word
apply
this
trend, I think having small
family can bring a positive impact on the community .
To being with, there are Add an article
a small
a
various explanations Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
why
some people Change preposition
for why
this
days prefer to have Change the determiner
these
small
Correct article usage
a small
fmaily
. Correct your spelling
family
Firstly
, having small
family means Add an article
a small
less
responsibilities. Change the quantifier
fewer
This
is because nowadays, both parents
often work and they do not have enough time to upbringing and look after large
family. Add an article
a large
Secondly
, parents
who have a small family are more likely to become financially stable. In other words
, having one or two child
, make Change to a plural noun
children
parents
spend less money on the
healthcare and education for their children ,which makes Correct article usage
apply
parents
feel less stress
.
In my opinion, having Replace the word
stressed
less
children can bring a number of benefits to society. To start with, having Change the quantifier
fewer
small
family can contribute to Add an article
a small
decrease
Correct article usage
a decrease
the
population of the world. To illustrate, the earth Change preposition
in the
face
many problems namely, shortage of fresh water, Change the verb form
faces
food
Correct word choice
and food
result
Wrong verb form
resulting
of
a Change preposition
from
lot
pressure by Add the preposition
oflot
increase
the Change the verb form
increasing
inhabitants
. Correct quantifier usage
number of inhabitants
Therefore
, having small
family can Add an article
a small
leads
to Change the verb form
lead
mitigate
Wrong verb form
mitigating
this
issues. Correct determiner usage
these
Furthermore
, having small
family can Add an article
a small
leads
to reduce the rate of crime Change the verb form
lead
as well as
poverty. To put in other words
, if the population drop the
people can easy to find jobs, Correct article usage
apply
becase
Correct your spelling
because
compete
Replace the word
competition
on
the job market will decrease, which Change preposition
in
this
can provide better life for all members of Correct pronoun usage
apply
scoiety
.
Correct your spelling
society
To sum up
, people tend to have Correct article usage
a samll
samll
family size in order to have Correct your spelling
small
smaller
less
duties and financial Change the quantifier
fewer
burden
, and Fix the agreement mistake
burdens
this
trend can impact community
positively including , reduce the pressure on Add an article
the community
the
natural resources , Correct article usage
apply
reduce
the rate of Correct word choice
and reduce
povery
and crime.Correct your spelling
poverty
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