The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009.
The provided pie charts illustrate the
electricity
generation in Germany and France
during 2009. For each country, the first chart describes the proportion of the
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electricity
sources, and the second chart reveals the ratio for each type of renewable electricity
.
To begin
with, almost 60.0% of electricity
in Germany generated
from conventional thermal, Add a missing verb
is generated
then
followed by nuclear and renewables, with 23.0% and 17.4% respectively. On the other hand
, in France
only around 10.0% of Add a comma
,France
electricity
generated
from conventional thermal, Add a missing verb
is generated
while
nuclear generated approximately 76% of electricity
. The other source for
produced Change preposition
of
electricity
in France
was renewables, at 13.7 %.
In Germany, biomass and wind had relatively
similar proportion of renewable Add an article
a relatively
electricity
, about 80% combined. In contrast
, roughly 80.0% of renewable electricity
in France
was hydroelectric, and only around 20% of wind and biomass was
renewable Correct your spelling
as
electricity
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