The graph gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030

The graph gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030
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The line graph illustrates data from 2008 on the usage of energy
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various fields in the United States of America from the year 1980 and projections until 2030.
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, it is clear from the data that petroleum shows the Highest
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from the starting period till the end. At the same time, nuclear, solar or wind and hydropower have shown the same quadrivium units in the initial stage and fluctuated over the years.
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, in 1980 petrol and oil was having 35 units and had some fluctuations over the year.
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, maintained the highest
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. It was followed by natural gas,at the initial stage by 20 units.
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, coal and natural gas have shown the same ratio from the years
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2010 to 2015.
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, during the final year coal was the one with the highest
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.
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, nuclear, solar or wind and hydropower have not shown any gradual increase , only slight changes can be noticed they were the minorities in
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data. In 1980 , they were about 7 quadrivium and in 2015 solar and quadrivium have shown almost the same ratio.
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, in 2030 nuclear energy was the highest
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when compared to the other.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words segment with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Renewable resources
  • Non-renewable resources
  • Fossil fuels
  • Nuclear power
  • Hydroelectric power
  • Solar energy
  • Wind energy
  • Biomass
  • Consumption patterns
  • Technological advancements
  • Energy efficiency
  • Sustainable development
  • Carbon footprint
  • Energy policy
  • Projections
  • Decade
  • Significant shifts
  • Economic factors
  • Environmental impact
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