The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainme
The table shows information about the spending of monthly household earnings in four countries
such
as France, Germany, the UK, Turkey and Spain.
It is apparent from the table, that food and drink have a big average percentage
rather than other necessities which is turkey in the first placement at 36%. Similarly
, housing also
has enormous numbers and the UK has the highest percentage
with 37%.
The entertainment and clothing necessity is not too much as people spend their income consuming food and housing. Although
, entertainment has a higher average number than clothing with Germany as the country which has the biggest percentage
at 19%. Clothing has the lowest percentage
of proportion which is the biggest in Germany with 15%.
Overall
, there are each different necessity proportions of spending income in four countries. The allocation for food and drink is the highest proportion, ,
Change the punctuation
apply
however
people do not really spend their income on clothing necessities.Add a comma
,however
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