The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
The diagram illustrates the method of geothermal power production.
Overall
, there are five steps for cold water
to be used as electricity.
To begin
with, once cold water
from precipitation is absorbed into
underground, the input Change preposition
apply
pumped
down a route, which is 4.5m long. Far under the ground surface, the injected Add a missing verb
is pumped
water
goes through geothermal
zone, which means that the Correct article usage
a geothermal
water
temperature is raised by the effect of hot rocks in the process. From then
on, the hot water
is push
up to return back to the land.
In the next stage over, the hot Wrong verb form
pushed
water
sonsequently
moved into Correct your spelling
consequently
subsequently
condenser
to be steam. Add an article
the condenser
a condenser
Then
, in the final step, the steam is converted as a form of power sourse
in Correct your spelling
source
sources
turbine
, which is made effective in the generator to be distributed as Add an article
the turbine
a turbine
a
Change the article
an
electiricity
.Correct your spelling
electricity
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