Some people believe that allowing children to make thier own choices on everyday matters is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a view that it can cause concerning

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for both the individual and

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society

to allow

children

to make every decision by

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.

However

,

although

it can be problematic in some cases,

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essay will explain why I would argue that

children

should hold their right to decide their own company for the sake of their adulthood. On the one hand, one of the main

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that can

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if

children

can decide every choice they face is the entitlement.

This

might cause them to believe that everything can be determined by their choice

whereas

it is never the case when they

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into adulthood.

For instance

, a

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who has grown

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such

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might feel desperate if he is not selected by any enterprises. Another worrying aspect is that

children

cannot have responsibilities for what they do.

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Considering

this

fact, the consequence could be possible dangers of crime without any restriction from parents on

children

's behaviour.

On the other hand

, in my opinion, the advantages of permitting

children

to

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make their original desition are enough to outweigh these aforementioned drawbacks, with appropriate set

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place. The most obvious of these is a greater sense of autonomy, which can be

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empowering

.

This

sense is extremely valuable because it has been shown as a necessary catalyst for drive and enthusiasm towards what they plan to do. A second benefit is that they can learn the management skill over their action. If,

in contrast

, a child always depends on

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their

parent's advice, they might be an adolescent who could not do

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anything

on

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their

own. In conclusion,

although

the pitfalls of accepting

children

to have

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control

over what they choose are the sense of entitlement and

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potential

crime, I believe that

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decision

should lie with

children

themselves on the basis that the

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an impetus to master what they want and

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development

to skill to think future.