You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six- year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter: – Explain why you would like the job – give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ – say how you would spend your free time while you are in Austra

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter regarding the paper advertisement which has published
last
Sunday in "Daily Mirror" magazine.
According to
the notice, you are searching for someone who prefers to live with your family and look after your little child for six month period. First of all, let me explain why I prefer to take
this
opportunity. Currently, I am following a course which belongs to child care and education and I worked as an Assistant Officer at South Child Care Institute 2 years ago.
Hence
, I have
experiences
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that how to live with children below 10 years.
On the other hand
, I can teach craft works and painting because I have adequate enough experience to train in the initial techniques.
Further
, I can assist to prepare meals, especially for some kids. I believe that those qualifications will match your requirements
Finally
,
this
is my semester break and usually, I have spent my breaks playing guitar at the Holy Cross orchestra as a Part-time job. Unfortunately, I was not able to join them
this
time.
Therefore
, I decided to join your family to fulfil my financial needs for my next semester. I am kindly looking forward to getting a favourable response. Thank You Yours Sincerely K. Lal
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