write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area. mention about the current sport facilities available what kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced how the new sports facilities would be a help for the people in your age group.

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Dear Sir, I am
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,a resident of Brampton,Ontario.I am working as an accountant
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Scotiabank.I am writing
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letter to request you to add more facilities
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sports in our area. To commence with,there is a volleyball and basketball ground at our place where we usually play during weekends.
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,many outdoor games like chess and tennis are
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there. But,these games are not enough for all of us as these are played by our seniors.So ,
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want you to introduce one
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volleyball net for teenagers only as it will help them to grow better and they can get an opportunity to learn new skills. Yours sincerely, Kiran
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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