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Many people believe that countries should produce food for the whole population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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I certainly agree that most nations must produce
food
 for their population first before using them for trade, since there are several ways to improve a
country
's revenue, and the
food
 industry should not be the one which takes part in it.
Firstly
, governments can trade goods and resources for improving their financial funds, but in the current situation where we are facing numerous global threats like deforestation, water scarcity, etc., there is a great possibility that in
our
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 future we will experience
food
 shortage.
Hence
, it is vital to avoid trading
food
 for a
country
's profit. Another important thing to notice is
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the recent decline in farming and agricultural occupations. Most countries are facing
this
 issue
due to
 the reason that many people are choosing higher education and sophisticated jobs.
Hence
, given
this
 current situation, it will be a risky business if a
country
 ventures into importing
food
 for reaping huge profits.
Secondly
, even in the present conditions, many governmental institutions are not aware
whether
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 the entire
country
's
food
 supply is at the right levels.
For instance
, in India, there are many parts of the
country
 where people are suffering from a
food
 crisis, and the most quality products are imported to other countries first to improve their wealth, but the well-being of the citizens is not considered.
Hence
, I believe a
country
 should utilize their other resources for trade and minimize
their
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food
 imports, as
food
 is the essential source for our survival. Shortage in any other resource can be solved by an alternative, but hunger will be a drastic problem.
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