The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and the plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and the plans for its development.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first map shows the centre of a town called Islip in its present day
while
the second map illustrates a development plan for Islip in the
future
.
Overall
, It can be clearly seen that in the
future
, Islip will be larger and bigger in facilities in order to accommodate people.
First,
A
road
has been changed from a single main
road
to a larger dual carriageway.
As a result
of a change in
road
, the Islip’s countryside will disappear in the
future
.
In addition
, it is obvious that the main
road
at the present day has been replaced by pedestrians only.
Moreover
, shops have merged into a shopping centre with a bus station and car
park
beside. The number of housing,
however
, has increased as there are two housing in the current but in the
future
plan
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two more housing will be developed next to a car
park
where it used to be shops and one next to the
park
. Another interesting point is that a
park
as it is now and a
park
in the
future
plan will be totally different in terms of its scale.
Park
in the
further
development will indeed get smaller and
also
school, it is noticeable that the school will be expanded a little bit in the
future
town development.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words future, road, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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