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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares and contrasts the data on how often
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US citizens consumed fast
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restaurants over a 10-year period from 2003 and 2013.
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US citizens consume fast
food
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 at least once a week and once or twice a month. Only a small part of the citizens eat it every day or never eat it at all. In 2003, it is noticeable that around 4% of
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 consumed fast
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 every day.
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, from 2006 to 2013 the
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 went down by 1%. But, it got more interesting as the
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 of
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 restaurants once a week increased dramatically, accounting for 33%, the same
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 applied in 2013 with
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 who ate once or twice a month.
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 its popularity plummeted again when it came to a few times a year. From 2006-2013, the
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 of
people
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 was the same at 15%. Another interesting point from the chart is
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 who never ate fast
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. There was 5% in 2003 but the
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 went down to 4% in 2006 and 2013.
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 shows that since 2006 more
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 were able to eat fast
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 at least once.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, people, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast food consumption
  • dining frequency
  • decade overview
  • trend analysis
  • to dine out
  • fluctuation
  • sharp increase
  • gradual decline
  • eating habits
  • statistical comparison
  • consuming pattern
  • noteworthy change
  • anomaly
  • periodic comparison
  • data interpretation
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