The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainme

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The table presents the distribution of the public's income every month spent in households in France, Germany, the UK, Turkey, and Spain.

Overall

, the community spend their monthly income on housing, except in Turkey and Spain which spend the most on food and drink. French, German, and British pay out about one-third of their salary to housing.

On the other hand

, Spanish and Turkish expend more than 30% of their salary on food and drink. As can be seen in the table, another general trend is that society in the four countries spends the least on clothing. Only in Turkey do people lay out in clothing more than in entertainment, about 2% higher.

In other words

, the British spend on clothing as much as their spent on entertainment about 11%.

According to

the data, it can be said population in the UK are the race who cares a lot about their home and the Turkish prioritize their meal above other's needs.

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