Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is positive or negative development?
Nowadays, people all over the world are able to buy identical
products
, therefore
countries are becoming similar.
On the one hand, similar products
can influence to
the local markets. Because each nation has Change preposition
apply
own
, unique cultural signature that Correct pronoun usage
its own
related
to its history, nature and religion. Too Add a missing verb
is related
much
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many
products
reduce the possibilities
to sell local handmade Fix the agreement mistake
possibility
products
with
good Change preposition
at
price
. Fix the agreement mistake
prices
For instance
, jewellers that make Kazakh national things using different ornaments and unique design
have to decrease the prices Fix the agreement mistake
designs
according to
the global market of simple and traditional jewels. Therefore
, it can lead to negative consequences of
the national Change preposition
for
hanmade
industry.
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handmade
On the other hand
, the availability of various types of products
has significant
impact Correct article usage
a significant
to
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on
the
buyers. Because consumers want to have a huge variety of choices. Correct article usage
apply
Furthermore
, it is important to customers that have specific requirements to buy one type of products
worldwide. Fix the agreement mistake
product
For example
, people with illnesses are able to travel globally, because they have opportunities to get the same medical products
as in their own country.
In conclusion, I suppose that buying identical products
in different parts of our planet can make a great contribution to development
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the development
our
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of our
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logistics
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