Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

Nowadays, people all over the world are able to buy identical
products
,
therefore
countries are becoming similar. On the one hand, similar
products
can influence
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the local markets. Because each nation has
own
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its own
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, unique cultural signature that
related
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to its history, nature and religion. Too
much
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many
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cheap identical
products
reduce the
possibilities
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possibility
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to sell local handmade
products
with
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good
price
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prices
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.
For instance
, jewellers that make Kazakh national things using different ornaments and unique
design
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designs
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have to decrease the prices
according to
the global market of simple and traditional jewels.
Therefore
, it can lead to negative consequences
of
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the national
hanmade
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handmade
industry.
On the other hand
, the availability of various types of
products
has
significant
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impact
to
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the
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buyers. Because consumers want to have a huge variety of choices.
Furthermore
, it is important to customers that have specific requirements to buy one type of
products
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product
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worldwide.
For example
, people with illnesses are able to travel globally, because they have opportunities to get the same medical
products
as in their own country. In conclusion, I suppose that buying identical
products
in different parts of our planet can make a great contribution to
development
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our
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of our
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Earth as a whole global market of things, customers and worldwide
logistic’s
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logistics
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chain.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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