The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The given picture illustrates how the
water
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cycle happens in nature, including both
surface
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water
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and underground
water
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. The
water
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cycle involves 4 different main stages, starting with evaporating
water
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and finishing with flowing to the sea. In the initial step, the heat from the sun help increases the
water
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's
surface
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temperature,
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,
water
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starts to evaporate into the air. The ocean contributes up to 80% of the total
water
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in the air. The
water
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vapour is
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condensed in the next step, which forms clouds when interacting with low temperatures in the atmosphere. After that,
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follows different paths to return back to the ground
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as snow and rain and falls to mountains and lakes. At the next stage, there is a step called "
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runoff" that makes
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water
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penetrate deep down into the ground before reaching the impervious layer. Groundwater
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follows the rivers to return back to the ocean. At the mouth of the river,
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water
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flow helps to prevent saltwater intrusion before reaching the ocean.
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