The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The given picture illustrates how the
water
cycle happens in nature, including both Use synonyms
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water
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water
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The Use synonyms
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cycle involves 4 different main stages, starting with evaporating Use synonyms
water
and finishing with flowing to the sea.
In the initial step, the heat from the sun help increases the Use synonyms
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temperature, Use synonyms
thus
, Linking Words
water
starts to evaporate into the air. The ocean contributes up to 80% of the total Use synonyms
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in the air. The Use synonyms
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vapour is Use synonyms
then
condensed in the next step, which forms clouds when interacting with low temperatures in the atmosphere. After that, Linking Words
water
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such
as snow and rain and falls to mountains and lakes.
At the next stage, there is a step called "Linking Words
surface
runoff" that makes Use synonyms
surface
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water
penetrate deep down into the ground before reaching the impervious layer. Groundwater Use synonyms
then
follows the rivers to return back to the ocean. At the mouth of the river, Linking Words
this
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water
flow helps to prevent saltwater intrusion before reaching the ocean.Use synonyms
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