The chart below shows the total number of minutes of telephone calls in the UK , divided into three categories, from 1995 to 2002.

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were done by British people based on the call types between 1995 and 2002.

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calls from the local area were the most favourites among them,

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there was a fluctuation throughout the period,

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national and international and mobiles witnessed an increase.

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,

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started at just above 70

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in 1995, rising gradually to a peak of 90

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in 1999, and

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dropping significantly until at around 70

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similar number

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the beginning.

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, national and international calling experienced

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steady growth over the period, when it had almost 35

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in the first year, soaring by

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half in the final year.

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, the progress of mobile

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showed an upward trend until 1999, and

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sharply to reach above 40

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in the following three years.