The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
The provided chart illustrates the proportion of
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driving testers who passed the
test
from 1980 to 2010. The proportion is measured in percentage and categorized based on gender (male and female).
Overall
, the percentages of females who passed the
test
were higher than males over three decades.
To begin
with, in 1980 the number of women who passed the
test
was merely under 50% which was almost double the ratio of men at that time.
Then
, the proportion of women slightly rose to just over 50% in 1990, and
then
the percentage significantly increased to reach its peak in 2000, at approximately 70%.
However
, in 2010, the rationals moderately dropped to roughly 65%. From the chart, it can be observed that the percentages of men who passed the
test
during
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period were on an upward trend. It start at nearly 30% in 1980,
then
dramatically climbed to under 40% in 1990.
Nevertheless
, the ratios sharply increased again to almost 50% in 2000, and
then
remain constant from 2000 to 2010.
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