The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011.

The table shows data about the amount of residents who go to work by bike

according to

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where they live between 2001 and 2011. The table compares twelve different areas in the United Kingdom.

Overall

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it is clear that

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the

area

Fix the agreement mistake

areas

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where there are more of them

Correct subject-verb agreement

are

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“Inner London” and "Outer London” and the two areas that assisted

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apply

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a massive

changement

Correct your spelling

change

are “Inner London” and “Brighton and Hove”. The area where most people

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went

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cycling to work in 2001 and 2011

mixed up

Verb problem

apply

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is clearly the British capital counting the

center

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centre

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and the outer of the city. In 2001, they were respectively at 43,494 and 33,836.

In addition

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, we can observe a massive change between 2001 and 2011 in the

center

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centre

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of London and in “Brighton and Hove”. Brighton and Hove had a change of 109

percent

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per cent

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which means two times more and London

city

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City

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had 144

percent

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per cent

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which is enormous.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

153 words

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