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Women can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many things that men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appreciated as much as men's, although they have to sacrififice a lot for their family and career. It is said: "A woman's place is in the home." What do you think?

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These days
women
's empowerment has been a top social campaign all around the world.
This
 movement has been happening because a lot of ladies feel discriminated against by
men
 despite their skills and abilities.
This
 essay will explain why the public perception of "
women
 should be at home" has to be broken and how
women
 are supposed to receive similar appreciation as much as
men
 do. With hard work to improve themselves and a better education,
women
 can simultaneously juggle themselves to raise their kids
as well as
 to be professionals in a working environment. It is not rare nowadays in multinational companies
women
 have become the leader bringing the company to a higher level. Nothing is wrong with
women
 being at home, but when
women
 can offer the same or even better skills than
men
,
then
 there should be no reason for being underappreciated.  The government as a policymaker should
also
 be in charge to create new regulations in order for
women
 to get fair yet equal treatment.
For example
, in the United States, it is a common practice in many organizations that
women
 receive lower salaries than
men
 in the same job position or working experience.
This
 is proof for the government to take legal action to ensure companies will assess objectively their employee based on contribution and not by sex. We all understand that historically adult females had been underappreciated since their duty to bear a baby and support their husband made them second-class.
However
, in
this
 modern world,
this
 sort of perception has to be removed since each people should be viewed objectively by their skill, attitude, and contribution to society.
Moreover
, to gradually remove
this
 perception, the government should
also
 take real action to ensure
women
 get the same privilege as
men
 do. Skills that matter not gender.
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