You recently bought an expensive electronic product from a store, and found that the product does not work properly. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, Complain about the problem Propose action for the store to take Request confirmation that this is agreed

Dear Ms. Smith, As you are a store manager, I am writing regarding the
coffee
machine
which I bought two days ago in your store. I have been a satisfied customer for several years, but the
coffee
maker does not work. Yesterday I tried to cook
coffee
before starting my work, but the hot water leaked out from the
coffee
maker’s pot because there was a small hole in the pot’s glass.
Also
, the
machine
became extremely hot when I switched on the
machine
. It was so dangerous because I almost touched the heated pot. I would like to propose that you come to my home and see what happened to my
coffee
maker. I hope you bring a new same type of
coffee
machine
to replace the broken one with the new one. I am sure that you can appreciate
this
situation and take action. I
also
request that you confirm to me in writing that you understand
this
problem and give me a copy of the confirmation. I hope it would never happen
this
kind of problem again when I bought your appliance next time. Kind Regards, Alice Edward
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