The given graph shows the main sources of energy for USA in 1980 and 1990
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USA
between 1980 and 1990.
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noticable
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oil
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.
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USA
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source
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sources
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source
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sources
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this
category made up 24% in 1980 and after 10 years. Change preposition
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energy
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sources
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USA
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power
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