The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
The pie chart illustrates the destination of Anthropology
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graduates
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their
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particular institute. The table displays their salary in three types of employment.
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the lowest number of them have both jobs and education. Linking Words
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other
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at just only 5% of them have salaries between 25000 and 49999. Linking Words
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most
proportion of workers who work in private companies gets a salary between 50000 and 74999 by 35%.
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the first goal of graduate students is full-time work by 52%, at just roughly 5% of them prefer to continue their Linking Words
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studies
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occupation. Correct article usage
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15% and 12% respectively.Change preposition
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