You ecently bought some food at a supermarket, but, when you got home, you found that the food was in bad condition. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter, -Explain what happen to you -Give details of the day and time of the purchase -Ask the manager what he/she intends to do about your experience

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about the ceasar chicken salads I bought from you a few days ago. I am Maria Do, a loyal customer of your supermarket, especially the deli counter. I went to your store to buy some ready-made food for my family’s celebration. All of the food was scrumptious except the Ceasar chicken salads. When I opened the boxes, they smelled.

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they were earlier than the expired dates, the chicken meat was saggy and the lettuce was rotten. All our family members were disappointed and the party lacked fun because they all loved your salad recipe. I enclose the receipt for your convenience. It was on Mother's Day afternoon, and the total bill was $300.

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poor quality food was really dangerous for our health. I wonder what would have happened if we had eaten them.

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, I would like to know your supermarket’s policy regarding my complaint. I look forward to receiving your response. Yours faithfully, Maria Do

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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8 paragraphs

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