A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as a human, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including use for foods and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that
animals
should have equal rights
as human beings or should be used for human purposes. While
some individuals suggest that animals
should be protected by laws of animal rights
, I would argue that it would be better to employ animals
appropriately and effectively to improve our quality of life. On the one hand, some people think that animals
should be protected by by-laws because they have equal rights
as humans
living together on the earth. Firstly
, if they don’t do anything damaging or harmful to human lives, we should respect them and do
not do anything that might threaten their existence. It is obvious that Unnecessary verb
apply
animals
help to balance our eco-system
and make our nature Correct your spelling
ecosystem
becomes
more diverse. Verb problem
apply
Secondly
, some animals
are our good friends from a long time ago. For For
example, dogs and cats can live with people as their friends and make us happy and safe. Eventually, dogs can help people Remove the redundancy
apply
hunting
and play as guards to protect poultries Wrong verb form
hunt
in
farms. Change preposition
on
On the other hand
, it would be more useful if we can
employ Wrong verb form
could
animals
appropriately for specific purposes such
as food sources and research. Firstly
, animals
should be used effectively to provide sufficient nutrition for our daily diet. We cannot have enough energy and muscles without eating fish and meat. Secondly
, animals
should be used effectively in some experiments that couldn’t be carried out on humans
. For example
, rats and rabbits are used quite often in vaccination laboratories to help humans
find out the appropriate vaccine to
against serious diseases Change preposition
apply
such
as malaria, HIV, and flu. Thirdly
, if humans
don’t intervene the animals
’ development, might increase very fast and will have negative effects on humans
. One good example of this
is the act of controlling the number of kangaroos in Australia in order to keep their population growing at a safe level for human beings and ecosystems. To sum up
, animals
should be protected by animal rights
as well as
used appropriately in order to maintain a balance of the eco-system
and usefully Correct your spelling
ecosystem
served
some specific human purposes.Wrong verb form
serve
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion