An increasing number of people are choosing cosmetic surgery. Why do people have operations to change the way they look? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

More and more people nowadays are willing to take cosmetic

surgery

as an option to alter their

appearance

. From my perspective,

this

is a negative development and

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as well as

my opinion. It can be observed that with the

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advancement of

technology

, cosmetic

surgery

services have become more affordable and

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,

besides

,

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appearance

is

also

a requirement in some jobs.

Firstly

, the new invention in

technology

and

surgery

have facilitated surgeons during their work which could not only increase the accuracy of the outcome but

also

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time down.

In addition

,

surgery

technology

could do some tasks more perfectly

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an affordable price, so

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many cosmetic operating sites have opened all over the world which gives people a chance to use

this

service at a

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.

Furthermore

, possessing a good-looking

appearance

is a requirement for being

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which could make the audiences’s first impression easier. Another reason why celebrities should be good-looking is that it could please watchers since everyone loves beauty.

However

, in my point of view,

this

is a negative development since patients have to pay a significant price for their health and audiences may miss some talents who do not possess a good-looking outlook and can not afford

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cosmetic

surgery

also

.

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the advancement of

technology

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body, it still has many drawbacks since substances which are injected into patients are continually eliminated from the patient's body because what the surgeon used is non-organic products which are not related to

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body.

Moreover

, some talents could be rejected because of their

appearance

and their financial problems which could lead to

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inequality in society.

Thus

, the entertainment industry would be invaded by beauties who have no abilities unless their

appearance

. In conclusion, it can be seen that the advancement of

technology

and science have made cosmetic

surgery

more easy

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to approach

while

it is

also

a should-have feature of jobs.

However

, it has several disadvantages

such

as using non-organic substances which could degrade

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health and result in inequality in society.

Thus

, I believe that

this

is a negative development.