Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals species.  some people say it's too late to do anything about this problem  other believes that effective measure can be taken to restrified the situation. discuss both view and give your opinion?

There is no doubt that human activities
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endangered
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environment over the centuries.
Although
some people argue that there is no longer anything we can do today,
this
essay will discuss
this
matter and explain why I agree with others who believe that we still have some ways to cope with the issues which have arisen from our activities.
To begin
with, one of the most concerning impacts we
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produced on
this
planet is global warming.
For instance
,
while
in the past we could see some school boys playing under the sun in the mid-summer, nowadays, it is suggested to take them inside in light of the potential heat stroke when we find
such
children.
This
is because our electricity use has generated
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amount of carbon footprint, which makes our globe warmer. Another worrying point behind our behaviour against nature is about endangered
spices
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species
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. As some of us
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been sadly
poarching
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poaching
searching
precious lives from forests in
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for
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financial profit,
this
problem has been
deterioated
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deteriorated
. The argument goes that it is too late to
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address
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them because we must
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continue
to use electricity and
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animals cannot be revived with our current technology.
On the other hand
, in my opinion, there are still measures that we can take, the most effective of which is that government
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should
provide incentives for eco-friendly businesses. In terms of the former problem, giving the advantage for the companies
contribure
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contribute
to carbon
netroral
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neutral
in their company strategies should result that those which obtained the incentive can make their products with
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the cheaper
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burden on their safe and sell them
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relatively cheaper price, which would encourage
customer
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to prefer
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eco-friendly
enterprise. As for the latter, considering the development of today's technology at an astonishing rate, we still have the hope to
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return
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species back to our planet. If ecologists find the breakthrough to make
such
animals revive,
this
planet will be allowed to enjoy biodiversity again. In conclusion,
although
there are limits modern people can conduct to deal with environmental problems,
such
as advancing global warming and increasing the number of endangered species, these issues should be hijacked if governments spend wisely on eco-friendly firms and
scientists'
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laboratories.
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