Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals species. some people say it's too late to do anything about this problem other believes that effective measure can be taken to restrified the situation. discuss both view and give your opinion?

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There is no doubt that human activities

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endangered

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environment over the centuries.

Although

some people argue that there is no longer anything we can do today,

this

essay will discuss

this

matter and explain why I agree with others who believe that we still have some ways to cope with the issues which have arisen from our activities.

To begin

with, one of the most concerning impacts we

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produced on

this

planet is global warming.

For instance

while

in the past we could see some school boys playing under the sun in the mid-summer, nowadays, it is suggested to take them inside in light of the potential heat stroke when we find

such

children.

This

is because our electricity use has generated

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amount of carbon footprint, which makes our globe warmer. Another worrying point behind our behaviour against nature is about endangered

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species

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. As some of us

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been sadly

poarching

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poaching

searching

precious lives from forests in

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for

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financial profit,

this

problem has been

deterioated

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deteriorated

. The argument goes that it is too late to

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address

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them because we must

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continue

to use electricity and

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animals cannot be revived with our current technology.

On the other hand

, in my opinion, there are still measures that we can take, the most effective of which is that government

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should

provide incentives for eco-friendly businesses. In terms of the former problem, giving the advantage for the companies

contribure

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contribute

to carbon

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neutral

in their company strategies should result that those which obtained the incentive can make their products with

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burden on their safe and sell them

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relatively cheaper price, which would encourage

customer

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to prefer

eco-friendlly

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eco-friendly

enterprise. As for the latter, considering the development of today's technology at an astonishing rate, we still have the hope to

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return

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species back to our planet. If ecologists find the breakthrough to make

such

animals revive,

this

planet will be allowed to enjoy biodiversity again. In conclusion,

although

there are limits modern people can conduct to deal with environmental problems,

such

as advancing global warming and increasing the number of endangered species, these issues should be hijacked if governments spend wisely on eco-friendly firms and

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laboratories.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals species. some people say it's too late to do anything about this problem other believes that effective measure can be taken to restrified the situation. discuss both view and give your opinion?

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