Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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economic growth, the underdevelopment of the

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been drawn to the attention of the developed

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of the Western.

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, governmental policies and interference in the agricultural business of the poorer

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were made to secure their dominant source of the economy. Many discussions among economists and politicians

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other aspects.

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, to improve the health, education and trade for the developing

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improvements cannot be made by these

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, but more external assistance and

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should be done. Because of the shortage of food supply, the people in poorer

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(i.e. Africa) are

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prone to disease, hunger and death. When natural or environmental

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with their lives. Education cannot be well developed

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of frequent droughts, famines and disease spreading. The other

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the development of agriculture in the

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, cannot really give the solution to the cyclical problem which has been existing for a long time. It is time to consider the consequences of all the waste of efforts in trying to help the economic growth of the

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and to think from

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other perspectives. The richer

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have the power to

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the

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by taking care

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essentials-health, education and trade. More

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for providing

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medicine, educational needs and materials can be done by the richer

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. The assistance of trade and developing business in the poorer

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can be of

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great help to the poorer

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. If the richer

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can be more serious about the essential issues of how a nation develops, and well consider the special situations and circumstances those poorer

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are facing, the improvements will be more efficiently made. The governments of developed

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are, in some ways, responsible - though not obliged - for the future of those developing

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