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In some counties,many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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It has become
trend
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a trend
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 among
youngster's
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youngsters
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 to live alone so that they can explore themselves,
whereas
 the number
is increase
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 in
current
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the current
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 generation compared to ancient
time
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. In
this
 following
essay
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 I will deeply explain the merits and demerits of
this
 idea.
Firstly
, every single individual
want
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wants
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 their personal
life
 separate from their parents
for
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so
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 that they live alone. Needless to say,
this
 attitude not only
help
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helps
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 to develop their inner confidence to face the world alone but
also
enhance
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enhances
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 their communication skill, like how to deal with other people
of
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in
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 their locality.
Moreover
, during that time young people learn how to manage their monthly
expense
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expenses
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 by themselves,
eventhought
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even though
even thought
 not
taking
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aids
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form
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from
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 their parents.
Therefore
, it is a kind of opportunity to explore their ability and develop other essential skills which are useful in
this
 modern era. Despite these positive effects, there are ample drawbacks
such
 as homesickness, to elaborate
it
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apply
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more, when adults start their own journeys
then
sometime
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 they fail to succeed in
this
life
 because
they
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they are
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 unable to handle the conditions and
circumstance
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circumstances
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.
As a result
, faced numerous issues like depression, anxiety and so on.
Along with
this
,
they
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sometimes
due to
 bad
community's
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community
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, they begin to take drugs and
make
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put
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 their
life
in
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at
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 risk.
Hence
,
about
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in
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this
 situation, parents are totally unaware and cannot do anything to
safe
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save
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 their
life
. In conclusion,
although
, living alone is the best idea to develop and explore
about
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the world and self,
nonetheless
due to
 homesickness and health problems the negative consequences of
this
is
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are
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 hard to avoid .
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Coherence & Cohesion
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Coherence & Cohesion
Make sure your ideas flow logically from one to another by using cohesive devices effectively, such as conjunctions and transition phrases.
Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure that your conclusion provides a clear and concise summary of your main points, and restate your opinion.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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