The bar chart shows the number of children in two different age groups in an average class in different countries.
The given bar chart tells us the
number
of pupils in an average class
at two ages 9 and 13 in four different countries; Japan
, Hong
Kong
, Russia, United States, and global
average.
Correct article usage
the global
Overall
, Japan
and Hong
Kong
have the highest number
of students
per class
at both ages. Generally speaking, the figure of
the United States is similar to the Global average, Change preposition
for
while
Russia has the lowest number
of students
per class
in this
graph.
Looking at the age
9 group first,
Hong
Kong
has approximately 35 students
per class
and the second highest is
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in
Japan
at 31 students
per class
. We can see the opposite trend at
the Change preposition
in
age
13 group as Japan
is the highest and Hong
kong
rank second at 35 Correct your spelling
Kong
students
, 31 students
per class
respectively. However
, the number
of students
in Russia stands the lowest in both age
groups at just over 11.
In terms of the United States, it shows close to 23 and 18 students
per class
in both age
9 and 13 groups each which are
similar to the Global average.Correct subject-verb agreement
is
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