The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by choosing and describe the main idea, and make comparisons where appropriate.

The bar chart illustrates the data

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job rates in six nations based on sex between 1995 and 2005.

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the figure provided

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both genders in all countries experienced increases over the period of two years, and the number of men

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more than women.

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in the six states had similar patterns, which they grew significantly throughout the years and became more dominant than the opposite. Iceland had the highest number among all nations,

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at above 80% in 2005,

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by Switzerland and Australia, which

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accounted for 55% and 65% respectively. The remaining countries had

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numbers in male jobs, which were around between 55% and 60% in 1995,

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to below 72% in the following

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decade.

On the other hand

, female employees had

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rates than

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in all nations during the period. More than 50%

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had a profession in Switzerland, soaring to just under 70% in 2005, and became the majority of

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them. British and United States had

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in 2005,

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at approximately 62%, growing by nearly four-fifths. The three states had rates below 55% in the final year, in which female Australian individuals were the least of them.