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Some people believe that modern technology encourages more sociable behaviour. Others say that this tend to lesser sociable behaviour. Discuss both views with examples and provide your opinion

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Modern technology can give rise to both advantages and disadvantages. Some might say that it encourages more social behaviour,
while
 others think it is the contrary. Because of modern technology,
people
 can connect with other
people
 that live far away with ease. Innovations
such
 as social media, applications for matchmaking and chatting now exist to enable that. It has become easier than ever to find
identities
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the identities
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 of
people
 that live all over the world
in
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on
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 both
platforms
. Most importantly, unlike sending letters via the post office, messages can be sent and received quickly. As there is no delay,
people
 are now able to talk in
real time
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 as if the parties in the conversation are physically present.
However
, a drawback to using those
platforms
 is that the users can spend too much time there and become less social with
people
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the people
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 around them. All of the
platforms
 can be accessed through mobile phones or laptops, which are portable devices that can be utilised anywhere and anytime.
This
 allows
people
 to use the
platforms
 at all times and engage with friends online more than they do with
people
 that exist near them physically.
Consequently
, it might be said that these
people
 become less sociable
due to
 the existence of
the
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online applications. In conclusion, products of modern technology
such
 as social media and applications for dating and chatting can bring
people
 to interact with one another wherever they live.
In
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 the contrary, it
also
encourage
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encourages
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 less sociable behaviour when the users
forgets
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forget
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 to be sociable with
people
 who are physically present nearby.
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