The graph below gives the information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with the predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relavent.

The graph below gives the information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with the predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relavent.
The given graph depicts some information on city living inhabitants percentage of four Asian countries.
This
chart illustrates the
overall
growth in population in these areas over the period of 1970 till the present and views predictions for the two incoming decades of 2030 and 2040.
Furthermore
, the whole data show a gradual rise in the city inhabitants percentage.
While
the least amount of increase belongs to the Philippines at about 20 per
cents
which began from the top populated over 30 per
cents
in the 70s and will be third in 2040
due to
a minor dip in the 90s and 2000s, the most boom would be the 50 per
cents
rise of Malaysia. Both Thailand and Indonesia started at between 10 to 20 per
cent
and mildly doubled into the same amount of a mere 30 per
cent
in the year 2000. Afterwards, Indonesia experienced a significant surge to almost 60 per
cent
in 2040, but Thailand even though it is estimated to have a high climb in the future but will be just above 40 per
cent
.
Overall
, the city population have been rising in the years and is predicted to be nearly overpopulated in the year 2040 as more than 80 per
cents
of Malaysia would be living in the cities.
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